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The thankful kids

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I'm thankful

 

I'm thankful for my dog killing a coyote,

 

I'm thankful for school day blues,

 

I'm thankful for the shoes getting eaten by a pitbull,

I'm thankful for my pants running away in the snow,

I'm thankful for my shirt for running

 

Comments (1)

sheri said

at 5:50 pm on Oct 11, 2007

I like that you followed the pattern of repeating I'm thankful; I see you even added in the school day blues! Those pants must have been running for the warmth of a bonfire. I wonder if you could add something about that. Keep up the good writing.

Ms. Edwards

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